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    #46
    A clear out of the blue surprise popped up in the mail yesterday.

    It was my copyright. Didn't even expect it.
    The Lord watches over me!

    "...they did the bowties, I did the ascots, as much as I have, I'm still reppin' the have nots..."

    - So Raspy

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      #47
      I'm not sure who's all interested, but the edits are progressing phenomenally. I'm setting a tentative deadline of this summer for publication. It's getting to be a more of a smooth read, and it's coming along. I got very little negative feedback, some neutral feedback, and some good/great feedback. I'm telling you, if you ride or just love to enjoy life, this book is for you.
      The Lord watches over me!

      "...they did the bowties, I did the ascots, as much as I have, I'm still reppin' the have nots..."

      - So Raspy

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        #48
        Very small piece from my book:

        The waiter gave a warm smile and walked away. The conversation at the table was centered around becoming more acquainted with the two new women joining the group. Continuing to drink and laugh while waiting for their food, Lines leaned over to his new woman.

        He whispered to her, "do you want to dance?"

        After the shot and a glass of champagne, she was feeling light and free like a silk scarf blowing on a windy Spring day. She leaned over in an attempt to make it look like she was whispering in his ear.

        She said to him, “I’d love to” while licking on the edge of his ear.

        The couple got up, and they walked over to a small area next to an unmanned piano. Their arms reached for one another, and they began to hold each other in dance position. As the music played in the background, Lines had a firm grip on her torso. It gave her the feeling of protection and comfort. The two of them began to move in unison to the music together. The smell of her perfume made Lines want to pick her up, put her on the piano, and push himself deep inside of her. However, he knew they were in a public place, and he had to maintain his composure. Simultaneously, the emotions she experienced made her feel light on her feet from his presence and his scent. She began to become more and more aroused, and she could feel her vagina getting wet. As the song came to an end, they began to separate. Those two received many smiles and soft applauds from onlookers in the restaurant.

        Lines whispered in her ear, “tell the table I’m going to the bathroom.”

        ...
        Last edited by Straight Success; 05-09-2019, 11:37 AM.
        The Lord watches over me!

        "...they did the bowties, I did the ascots, as much as I have, I'm still reppin' the have nots..."

        - So Raspy

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          #49
          More progress.

          Manuscript Critique : ...Done...
          Comprehensive Edit : ...Done...
          Minor Tweaking : ...In Progress...
          Copy Editing : ...Coming Soon...
          Proof Reading : ...Coming Soon...
          Publication : Summer 2019
          The Lord watches over me!

          "...they did the bowties, I did the ascots, as much as I have, I'm still reppin' the have nots..."

          - So Raspy

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            #50
            Book in on pre-order now.

            I PM'ed Mike to see if I can post a link to it. I'm telling you, it's a great read. The editing polished this thing right up.
            The Lord watches over me!

            "...they did the bowties, I did the ascots, as much as I have, I'm still reppin' the have nots..."

            - So Raspy

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              #51
              Getting ready to head to final proofing. Pre-orders are already on deck. Finishing up on the last of the content editing.

              With 80,000 words, there's bound to be a mistake. It'll get taken care of with final proofing.

              "...he was on his way through the bedroom door..."

              Pre-Order Link

              #hardwork #dedication


              Last edited by Straight Success; 05-25-2019, 11:30 AM.
              The Lord watches over me!

              "...they did the bowties, I did the ascots, as much as I have, I'm still reppin' the have nots..."

              - So Raspy

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                #52
                Originally posted by Straight Success View Post
                Getting ready to head to final proofing. Pre-orders are already on deck. Finishing up on the last of the content editing.

                With 80,000 words, there's bound to be a mistake. It'll get taken care of with final proofing.

                "...he was on his way through the bedroom door..."

                Pre-Order Link

                #hardwork #dedication



                P84

                Lines would get “cleaned” up

                Word used is “clean”
                Originally posted by wed3k
                im a douchebag to people and i don't even own a lambo. whats your point? we, douchbags, come in all sorts of shapes and colours.

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                  #53
                  Originally posted by toycar View Post
                  P84

                  Lines would get “cleaned” up

                  Word used is “clean”
                  Great catch, and that's why it's going off for proofing. 80,000 is a lot to look at.
                  The Lord watches over me!

                  "...they did the bowties, I did the ascots, as much as I have, I'm still reppin' the have nots..."

                  - So Raspy

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                    #54
                    Pre-orders are rolling in. It's a great read. Be sure to grab a low numbered copy.
                    The Lord watches over me!

                    "...they did the bowties, I did the ascots, as much as I have, I'm still reppin' the have nots..."

                    - So Raspy

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                      #55
                      Anthony I place my order. Looking forward to reading it. Would be awesome if you could autograph it. My name is Nick M. So if you see the order I would greatly appreciate it. Looking forward to a good read!
                      ~Nick~
                      FSAE (F Series Accord Enthusiasts) ..."A dying breed thats taking it to the next level" Lucky #13
                      MR Thread:http://www.cb7tuner.com/vbb/showthre...ight=Grumpys93

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                        #56
                        Originally posted by Grumpys93 View Post
                        Anthony I place my order. Looking forward to reading it. Would be awesome if you could autograph it. My name is Nick M. So if you see the order I would greatly appreciate it. Looking forward to a good read!
                        I got it. I actually have some pre-orders rolling in, and when I saw the name, I didn't recognize it.

                        Thanks for the support, and after you read it, please let me know what you think - good or bad. Everyone who has read the entire MS thinks it's a great story/read. I'm not exaggerating.

                        I'll gladly autograph your copy. My tentative publish date is July 1st, so you should have it around the first week in July.

                        Any question, feel free to PM or Email me.

                        Last edited by Straight Success; 05-27-2019, 01:36 AM.
                        The Lord watches over me!

                        "...they did the bowties, I did the ascots, as much as I have, I'm still reppin' the have nots..."

                        - So Raspy

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                          #57
                          Still working hard at it up until publication. The final touches are going into effect.

                          Six Gears is now being optimized on Google.

                          The Lord watches over me!

                          "...they did the bowties, I did the ascots, as much as I have, I'm still reppin' the have nots..."

                          - So Raspy

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                            #58
                            Pre-order Link


                            The Lord watches over me!

                            "...they did the bowties, I did the ascots, as much as I have, I'm still reppin' the have nots..."

                            - So Raspy

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                              #59
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                              Last edited by Straight Success; 06-15-2019, 04:31 AM.
                              The Lord watches over me!

                              "...they did the bowties, I did the ascots, as much as I have, I'm still reppin' the have nots..."

                              - So Raspy

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                                #60
                                Got mine. I feel like this is going to be real... coming from the South Atlanta me.

                                YouTube Clicky!!

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