here it goes: my little works of art

[cp[mike]]

just wanted to post this up to get feedback from other artists on here, its a bunch of wallpapers that ive made (from scratch) - i want criticism, comments, feedback, i want to know what im doing wrong and what i can do better.

each wallpaper is named so if you post feedback about a specific pic please lemme know which one youre talking about.

these are actually spread out across a couple years, with the oldest in the top left and they get newer as you go right. so dont complain about how simple and unimpressive Temporal Security is

and heres my wallpapers:
http://www.****.com/index.php?c=wallpaper

[HondaGuy1212]

the 09 dohc vtec wallpaper looks awesome

[starchland]

looks good man did you do all the photos? im in graphic design myself, how did you do all that crazy 3d stuff?

[TysCb7]

They all look awsome I wish I was talented like that I have the your VTEC wallpaper on my desktop one of my favorites.

[cp[mike]]

first clouds photo i got from a website, i didnt take that pic.

for the dohcvtec wallpaper, excalibur02 on here took the pictuer and i made a wallpaper out of it (i added the banner of course)

about the 3d aspect, i thought up in my head whati wanted it to look like, then did all of it in 3D Studio Max (newest version name has been changed to "3ds max"), pasted it into photoshop (using version 7 at the time), then finished it up with that.

thanks for the good comments people!! any criticism?

[92DXProject]

not much criticism here....I think they are all nice pieces....

[That1guyN8]

Loving the wallpapers!

[Beefy]

same here, them are sweet

[501accord]

the ones that say unused space kick ass!, hah jp man, looks good, you mind if i use one for a desktop?

[cp[mike]]

thanks for the good comments everyone. and 501, sure i dont mind if you use them at all, thats why they are there!

any criticism? i wanna improve myself

[cp[mike]]

bump for any artists on here who could help me out

[jdm91cb]

looks good mike got 09 as my work desktop lol good stuff bro

[jboyce]

i'm an artist, bein doing it for about 5-6 years.

as for criticism of your peices, you should really brighten them up and use more space, especially on wallpapers. simplicity is good somtimes, but not always. also try getting some different fonts, search googe for fonts. also it's good when you get really into art to not use other peoples pictures in your art, it sort of detracts from the feeling that it's completely made by you, and also could run into legal issues.

here is something i made a lil bit ago, see how the image portrays depth with the use of contrast. i have a sharp object up front, and it's slightly blurred behind. font place and overlays are key as well. sorry i won't go into anymore detail, if you want more help just get ahold of me.



i wont post anymore of my images here, but if you want to see more of my work just go to my website http://s92198702.onlinehome.us all of it is done by me, some 3d program but mainly photoshop.

[jboyce]

p.s. how did you get 3ds max? all i had is cinema 4d

[midnightrayne]

very nice work guys, i teach graphic design not much into 3d tho, i did blow upa furby once that was pretty cool. Love hearing from other artist.