Freestyling thread

[MRX]

whats up ladies and gents? I'm starting this thread because b4 i got my cb7 (when i had no job, no money, and all the time in the world) i started rapping, writing, and break dancing to pass my time and since i still carry this interest with me i thought i'd make a thread to send out a challenge to those of you that can rap a little bit. I'm at work at the current moment so i can't really give you guys a sample but if you wanna drop some lines for all the nice ppl that'd be great. I'd even like to have little live battles in AIM chats and stuff where we pick a time and date and everybody crowds into one room to spit some knowledge. Let me know if your in by just typing "I'm in" and if you wanna give us a sample that'd be great, lates.

[MRX]

Its perfectly ok to spectate but spectators have to speak up and say who they like better and stuff so this can be a worthwhile thread. This is all in good fun...so do just that and have fun

[Maple50175]

Heres one a made awhile ago

once i win i'll put your blood in my pen where your blood will flow
i'll take this battle so high i'll win by no show/
u say your asian well stop being a disgrace
cause u just got rhymes stck through your face/
i'm really like a tornado cause i turned his life around
no need for weapons hit him once, he's shaking on the ground/
got no chance cause u make me feel like a god
u aint no rapper your a losing froud/
it dont matter wat the odds r even 100 to 1
cause im the one and one hit and your done/
think of 10 bars when 5 could get rid of u
all i really needed was two bars to beat this fool/
i'll split u like a lumberjack is splitin some wood
u cant diss me casue your like a gentleman who can never be rude/
y dont u give while u still got a chance to run
it wouldnt even effect me if u shot me with a gun/
take some pills u outta be losin your head
my mistake my rhymes will make sure your dead/
after this batlle u aint gonna feel scandilous
u'll regret accepting my battle cause u got beat by ten bars of diss/


Yeah :-/

[accordtunerx]

ok.. here's a little short rhyme:

i'm not a ricer - but i spit fire like a flame throwing exhaust//
i don't follow trends, so there's no way for me to get lost//
don't tempt me, i build up fury like jenga towers//
you'll need more than an umbrella when i reign down with power//
i don't have time for noobies - whether tuners or lyricists//
so hold back the weak lines, and take notes when hearin' this//
get to writin', because time flies and is quick to taper//
but rollin' blunts is the only time you'll put some good stuff on paper//
so attempt to lay it down, or be layed down and walked over//
slide to the side, or be forced with this lyrical crossover ~

[MRX]

quicky since i'm at work:

Seven different hells when I’m pushed to the border,
Flip out with seven different levels of bi-polar disorder,
Lead’em through chaotic mental wars cause he said he’s a soldier,
Seven different voices screamin’ “Bombard’em with mortars!”

[accordtunerx]

pretty good! more poetic, i like it

[deevergote]

Originally posted by midnite racer x
quicky since i'm at work:

Seven different hells when I’m pushed to the border,
Flip out with seven different levels of bi-polar disorder,
Lead’em through chaotic mental wars cause he said he’s a soldier,
Seven different voices screamin’ “Bombard’em with mortars!”

You've got some defintite skill there man! I won't even attempt anything myself...

[MRX]

freestyling tonight to help a friend prepare for a battle and heres the best i could come up with:

take the sweaters off, now roll up the sleeves,
we runnin away wit the crowd, u would think we was theives,
from wall to wall they screamin our names,
been rippin since a quarter pint and ain't nothin changed.
the atmosphere is blarin, all the cuties is starin,
i just made good wit three, tryin to make it apparent,
i'm so high up the sun can't see my glare,
lookin off to the side but i'm way over there

all the haters is hatin, they backs to the back,
the crowd is staggerin', they become one wit the rap,
amazement forcing them, their bodies relax,
strechers come runnin, that girl just relapsed.
couldn't handle the pressure, and more start a fallin,
stumblin' through the ganstas, must be alcoholics,
rhymes intoxicate, the remaining start ooohing
u would think i was smokin, from the way i be leanin,
u would think i'mma playa, from all the girls that be screamin
the building is shatterin, support beams are rattlin,
and its cause cause i said,
"i fried that man, i made wit the batterin'"

holy wars with the devils in the pits,
minds clearly staggered, beaten,
by 2 by 4's clapped together
with the force of a god's fist
the power corrodes me,
its like the gift that explodes me,
emotions running deep,
yet it happens so slowly

last decent one...
started with the roses, kisses, and candle lite dinners,
took me back to the crib, and now i'm up in 'er,
teasing the flesh, without even breakin a sweat,
no need for sex toys, i got a hand full of her hair,
and i think i'mma cowboy,
them legs start a shakin, from all this lovin' we makin'
ain't no buns in the oven but this coochy is bakin,
picture legs slanted and cocked to the when,
she knows i'mma freak and we slippin' and slidin'

[MRX]

the air's gettin heavy, yet he's flowin so steady,
its like the boys been rehearsin, its the third that he's talkin in person,
heard that he's concealin, hardly ever revealin,
rhymes scorch so hot they blacken the ceiling

[MRX]

just thought of this one...
The ingredients bought it and now I’m dealin’ it,
Can’t even speculate just say u feelin’ it,
Been through a couple of things in my lifetime,
Couple of times I thought I’d said my last rhyme,
But I was inclined, hard headed, ignored the signs,
Couldn’t let another soul ever take whats mine.
Tho I was doubted and promised I’d never succeed,
Told me
I’m just another voiceless mouth amongst all these fiends.
Wit a mind so clear, and eyes so focused,
You’ll find,
few men that’s brave enough to provoke this.
Sharper than meat cleavers,
Smart enough to deceive ya,
Gotta few diva’s ,
That love to ride in this two liter
But I’m not gonna sit here and try to claim the throne,
I’mma just sway ya’ll my way, I’m just bringin u home,
I’m a little unique, I don’t quite rhyme like them,
Hair ain’t bleach blonde, no bitch named kim
Soft? Naw never, this boy ain’t nice,
Like Jay said “I’m so far ahead I’m bout to pass you twice”
Its like for years he’s been thinkin’ of what to rhyme about,
Not written, rehearsed, they just flow out his mouth
I’m becoming a power hungry rapper its what I’m like,
Treat you like your father you’ll never suffice,
Anything you say or do...u don’t get no love,
You can go cryin back to your mammi,
Maybe she’ll lend a spare hug,
Nothing like it, I’m you times three
Whinin’ like a bitchs wit a slightly skinned knee

[accordtunerx]

subliminal tactics when i'm kickin' this rap shit//
with lines so graphic, i stretch minds like elastic//
i rip rhymes so esctatic, you melt down like plastic//
what i find is irratic, you compete to get outlasted//
fall victim to the wordplay, you're metaphorically stunned//
another battle? anytime - you're invited cordially son//
lightning strikes the ground, and reflects through my pupils//
this must be a JDM rhyme, because i'm feeding you SPOONfulls//
hyped like williams, only i produce textual creations//
and spool rhymes so quick, my heart pings with enragement ~

[WiKKeDV16]

ill rap strickly about imports
no not goya or fruitworks
this isnt grocery talk
strickly rock the cawk
outlast you and your nitrous
the frown on ur face is priceless
no pricetag on my motivation
stare down my taillights, and feel the vibration
its EXHAUSTing to say the least,
as the pedal gets released
hear your ears burst to my bov
the sense of holyness from above
its more than a gymic
this boost filled lyric
is more than enough to detonate
you better bow and appreciate
my air/fuel is 13 to 1
this battle is done
there is only one ruler
kneel to..
cb7-tuner


it may be weak but i havent done this shit in so long..

[MRX]

Originally posted by accordtunerx

this must be a JDM rhyme, because i'm feeding you SPOONfulls//

i liked that one lol but u know i gotta counter-act

my rhymes are hittin u so hard its given u contusions,
reverberatin' through ur head so loud u would swear it was Mugen.


get at me

[accordtunerx]

Originally posted by midnite racer x
i liked that one lol but u know i gotta counter-act

my rhymes are hittin u so hard its given u contusions,
reverberatin' through ur head so loud u would swear it was Mugen.


get at me

i see through your styles like those clear acrylic hoods//
see - you should never underestimate the misunderstood//
i'm a cognitive word machine with an alphabet of my own//
spinnin' mics above my head to create tornadic cyclones//
inhale you like impeller blades, i hook up these lines like a phone//
and like the properties in monopoly - you're bound to get :owned:

[MRX]

nothing more than an unwanted step-child,
given fear in advance,
dare not to shoot one glance,
he'd nearly piss his pants.
The only styles your seeing through
are your own pitched sales,
and the only acrylic your really worried about,]
is your Type-R lee press-on nails.
Now, I'mma start dwindling this commotion,
turn down the hype,
continue to treat u like a drifting dildo,
straight fuckin' u left to right.
I'm recalling this man,
like ignition coils in a 4G
"i hook up lines like a phone"!?!?!?
That reeked! When'd u start rappin' for APC!?
That sucked on several different levels,
son take it back home,
you know i'm deadly, why step?
just leave it alone.
Calls himself a tuner,
but these are all false tales,
did him like Amtrack,
"ATTENTION all passengers, atx's rhymes are now derailed"