Need Critique

[lil_dcb7]

christ, i hope i spelled that right

recently, my girl made me a really really wonderful and sweet poem, and thats what shes good at, so i decided to make something for her in return. i made her a movie,

http://media.putfile.com/For-my-Lady-93


so, let me know what you guys think, i need some feedback!

[501accord]

i think that anime is really lame. unless your into that.

[palinix]

Is your girl a Cowboy Bebop fan?

[lil_dcb7]

Is your girl a Cowboy Bebop fan?

no. i dont think shes ever heard of it...

[palinix]

no. i dont think shes ever heard of it...

OK. Reason I asked, was that it would add to the effect if she knew some background info on what she was seeing. Otherwise it might just seem somewhat random.

Still, there is the song I suppose.

[d112crzy]

told you.

[lil_dcb7]

told you.

shut up

you dont count


we talked about it already


but ya, you did

[DhN]

no offence..thought this shit was lame

why?

its for your girl...try and get shots of you and her together...make a photo collage video or somethin...or a collage of stuff that is special to you guys and reminds you of different events and such.l..the anime shit is mad lame son...unless you guys watch that together and are both into it...idk..when the shit started playin i was laughin..and idk why...good thought tho...or just film moments together and etc..idk.,.do somethin besides this imo

[DhN]

and if your gonna do anime or somethin...edit stuff together that can make a story relevant to what you guys were going through..feel me?..not jus random love shit..maybe stuff that actually happened to you..itll take research and time but....shes worth it right lol

[93EXaesthetic]

havent watched it yet.. cuz its still buffering but it has to be cool if cowboy bebop is in it

[lil_dcb7]

well, see, this was just something to put together, because she made me something

im making a video like the one you suggested for our anniversary.




she really loves this song, and i wanted to make her something with it. so it really wasnt meant to represent anything.

[90exaccord]

throw a lil beat or somethin ionno dude no offence but it sounds depressing but good thought my friend.... good thought

[owequitit]

You DID spell critique correctly.

I will get back to you later tonight when I get a chance to actually watch it.

Most likely though, the fact that you made it thinking of her will make it OK...

[Gemini]

You DID spell critique correctly.

I will get back to you later tonight when I get a chance to actually watch it.

Most likely though, the fact that you made it thinking of her will make it OK...

x2.....cant watch it until i get home.

[cb7wagonPL]

i say do what DhN said. do a nice pic collage of you guys and something that you both can relate to. Do that and flowers and you're good. can't go wrong with flowers for a girl