so i started writing some chit....
comments/critique...good...bad?
I see shapes and faces painted ever so gracious amidst the naked blue
they hide inside the darkness, closing the shimmering eyes of the sky
they become harder to see when the sun falls asleep
but as the hasty cities breathe they race above our dreams
daintily dancing amidst the azure
these deitys are no daisies rest assured
their foray has suffocated a bounty of eupnea
yet the complacent westward zephyr acquits any complaint
they may recess from the sky to rest amidst our eyes
they’re essential to life, were even sad when they cry
I wearily gazed at the gloomy mist that drooped despairingly
then through a crack an effulgent ray beveled the edges
then i questioned...beautiful billow....or terrible weapon?
comments/critique...good...bad?
I see shapes and faces painted ever so gracious amidst the naked blue
they hide inside the darkness, closing the shimmering eyes of the sky
they become harder to see when the sun falls asleep
but as the hasty cities breathe they race above our dreams
daintily dancing amidst the azure
these deitys are no daisies rest assured
their foray has suffocated a bounty of eupnea
yet the complacent westward zephyr acquits any complaint
they may recess from the sky to rest amidst our eyes
they’re essential to life, were even sad when they cry
I wearily gazed at the gloomy mist that drooped despairingly
then through a crack an effulgent ray beveled the edges
then i questioned...beautiful billow....or terrible weapon?
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